Wikipedia:Peer review/Pope Alexander VI/archive1

Pope Alexander VI[edit]

A fairly comprehensive article on an interesting, complex personage, but it has been pointed out the article needs some rewriting for NPOV, and I would appreciate any other input on how this article can be improved further. --BorgQueen 02:26, 26 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, beginning with the very first sentence it is quite non-neutral, and the various opinions need to be backed up with documented, authoritative references. (See Template talk:Ref.) There is little information in the article regarding his youth, and 61 years of his life are jumped over in the span of a couple of early paragraphs. Thanks. — RJH 03:39, 11 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

That is done in many articles about people of that era about whose early life not much is known. What would you expect?-Andy