Wikipedia:Peer review/Oil/archive1

Oil[edit]

Very important topic as it is *meant* to summarize all the different types of oil. Seriosuly needs work - suggestions/comments? — Wackymacs 06:58, 19 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.

Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.

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Thanks, Andy _t 15:36, 19 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Let's start with one issue: the artcle needs expantion, it is now barerly more then a stub. Second, the article has no references. These issues should be addressed first, then we can go into other details.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus ^Talk 21:53, 24 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]