Template:Did you know nominations/Common (film)

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:00, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

Common (film)[edit]

  • ... that reviewers called the BBC One film Common "profoundly engaging" and "unrelentingly depressing"?
  • Reviewed: HD 41248
  • Comment: hook tweaks and ALTs welcome

Created by Edwardx (talk), Lowellian (talk), Cannonmc (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 00:26, 13 July 2014 (UTC).

I suggest not to end "depressing", to engage readers ;)
ALT1: ... that reviewers called the BBC One film Common "unrelentingly depressing" and "profoundly engaging"?
Interesting article on good sources. Can you help us to an infobox? I suggest to have the current lead in the body, perhaps as "History", - look how others do it -, keeping only essentials in the lead, without refs. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:50, 19 July 2014 (UTC)
Thank you Gerda Arendt. I've added an infobox, moved the current lead to "Background" and created a new lead. Edwardx (talk) 11:29, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
both, prefer ALT1, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:31, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
That was quick. I prefer your ALT1 too, so I'll strike my original hook. Edwardx (talk) 11:43, 21 July 2014 (UTC)