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Until the Whole World Hears has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

Until the Whole World Hears is part of the Casting Crowns studio albums series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.

Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
June 20, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed
February 4, 2013	Good topic candidate	Promoted

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on April 7, 2012.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Christian rock band Casting Crowns' fourth studio album, Until the Whole World Hears, sold 167,000 copies in its first week?

Current status: Good article

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Until the Whole World Hears/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 04:24, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):
b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Infobox[edit]

Put specifics in recording location, instead of "Various locations in the United States"
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

Two album cuts, "To Know You" and "Joyful, Joyful", also appeared on the Christian Songs chart, peaking at Nos. 27 and 3, respectively. → Replace "Nos." with "numbers"
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Background and songwriting[edit]

No issues

Composition[edit]

...as 'pure American rock',[6] 'soft adult contemporary',[3] and 'CCM';[6] → Put period at end of "CCM"
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
One critic observed that most of the songs on the album... → Start the sentence with the name of the critic
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Another theme present throughout the album i... → Not a complete thought and without a source
- Whoops, brainfart there. Removed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Combine two subsections into one section as both are two small to warrant subsections
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Release and sales[edit]

Billboard magazine ranked Until the Whole World Hears as the best-selling Christian album and the 37th best-selling album overall of 2011.[13][14] It also ranked as the 3rd best-selling Christian album and the 137th best-selling album overall of 2011.[15][16] → Combine sentences into paragraph above in section
- Done. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Subsection is not necessary; put "Singles" information in second paragraph of section
- Done. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Reception[edit]

Debra Akins of Gospel Music Channel.com said the album... → Wiki-link entire phrase of "Gospel Music Channel"
- Fixed - I thought it winkilinked '.com' add-ons, but I guess it doesn't. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Track listing[edit]

No issues

Personnel[edit]

No issues

Charts and certifications[edit]

No issues

References[edit]

Reference 1 → "Gospel Music Channel.com" should not be italicized and should also just be "Gospel Music Channel"
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05
Reference 4 → Provide the actual external link to verify information that comes from this source
- Aside from linking to the google books page, I switched the template to a 'cite journal' template to represent it being a magazine. Toa Nidhiki05 15:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
References 9, 17, 18, 24 → "Billboard" and "Prometheus Global Media" do not need to be wiki-linked as they were before
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 15:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 10 → Provide actual URL to support information brought on by source
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 15:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
References 12, 19 → "Jesus Freak Hideout" should be publisher and not italicized or wiki-linked; John DiBiase should be put as author of article
- Fixed
Reference 21 → "Allmusic" should not be italicized
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 15:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 23 → "The Tennessean" and "Gannett Company" should not be italicized
- Fixed. Toa Nidhiki05 15:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put this article on hold. There are some minor prose issues and citation format issues that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these issues and/or address issues you believe do not concern the good article criteria. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 05:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 22:33, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]