Talk:Sol Pais

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Whole Article[edit]

Thinking off creating a whole article for Sol Pais, what do y’all think? Genberg47 (talk) 02:19, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Wording in lead[edit]

"She was found dead from a self-inflicted gunshot wound on April 17, before the manhunt began." Is a quite confusing sentence

On April 17 is when she was found but "before the manhunt began" makes it seem like she was was found dead on the 17th which was before the manhunt started. I was confused reading this line so I just assumed that the 17th was the date of her death as the next sentence seemed to imply. Essentially, the current phrasing could potentially confuse readers Flaming Hot Mess of Confusion (talk) 13:46, 18 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]