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Remove copyedit needed template?[edit]

I went through and fixed most if not all copyedit typos throughout the article. I am considering removing the template, however, I think it would be best to get a second opinion first. EarthCore9999 (talk) 05:09, 19 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Major revision complete[edit]

Hi All,

I completed a thorough copy edit of this article, which included combining elements, revising order of materials, fixing all grammar and punctuation errors, reviewing all links and removing/replacing dead links. Reorganized subheadings. Edited for flow, conciseness, and style. Feel free to edit my work should it not meet the goals stated above. Thank you! Jenbird831 (talk) 11:23, 28 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Shouldn't the article also include the other way?[edit]

I.e. the substantial ecological cost of obesity, as attested by numerous studies? Here is an example: https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fnut.2019.00126/full "We provide evidence, at world level, of the enormous amount of food lost through obesity and its ecological impact." It is currently well known that the relation between obesity and quality of environment is mutually detrimental and a vicious circle. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A01:CB04:BC:3200:4977:38D9:A2A2:A9FC (talk) 18:25, 27 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]