Talk:Hurricane (Eden Golan song)

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"Hurricane" is a song by Israeli-Russian singer Eden Golan[edit]

why have you mentioned "Russian"? "Unicorn" is a song by Israeli singer-songwriter Noa Kirel.

I.M" is a song by Israeli singer Michael Ben David

"Toy" (Hebrew transliteration: טוי) is a song recorded by Israeli singer Netta Barzilai.

and I can go on and on.

84.110.218.178 (talk) 16:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 30 April 2024[edit]

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Insert: Israel, with the help of the US, UK, Germany and others are committing a genocide, right now. Please boycott the Eurovision if you don't support genocide of the Palestinians. Over 35,000 are murdered so far, over 70% are women and children.

(If you're the person reading this suggested inclusion, its time to take a your stand for humanity. Do it!) 137.191.235.66 (talk) 12:03, 30 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Cowboygilbert - (talk) ♥ 16:02, 30 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Eden Golan is Israeli, not Israeli-Russian. 2A06:C701:4D1B:B401:CB53:D05E:CF02:107D (talk) 08:08, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Charliehdb (talk) 10:17, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hurricane was 2nd in ESC2024 televote[edit]

Hurricane was 2nd in ESC2024 televote. This relevant information should be mentioned in the introduction of the article. Buffaldrino (talk) 05:17, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

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Nominator: Nascar9919 (talk · contribs) 03:46, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Pollosito (talk · contribs) 19:34, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
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a (major aspects): b (focused):
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It is stable.
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Pass/Fail:

Hi, @Nascar9919! I'll be reviewing this article as soon as possible. I don't promise to be that fast, but I will try to be as fast as possible because I know how frustrating it is to wait so long. Very recent, yes, but I see that it is very stable. Best, Santi (talk) 19:34, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Thank you so much for taking this on. Don't worry about rushing through this; I know this deals with a very complicated subject. Feel free to take as much time as you need. Cheers, and carpe diem! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 19:37, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Pollosito Pinging as a reminder. Hope you can get on this soon! Cheers, and carpe diem! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 20:43, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, @Nascar9919. Still busy, sorry. Santi (talk) 22:08, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 14 May 2024[edit]

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In the last paragraph of Section 4.2 "At Eurovision" it states "The song was performed sixth in the final, ahead of The Netherlands' Joost Klein and before Lithuania's Silvester Belt." This should be updated to account for the fact that Joost Klein was disqualified, can use the following instead.

"The song was performed fifth in the final, ahead of Luxembourg's Tali and before Lithuania's Silvester Belt (Golan was originally set to perform sixth until the disqualification of The Netherlands' Joost Klein)" Snkn179 (talk) 09:01, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

For genre in infobox, please use Pop Ballad[edit]

Sourced here: https://www.timesofisrael.com/israels-eurovision-singer-eden-golan-upbeat-despite-scrutiny/ https://www.timesofisrael.com/when-an-israeli-showed-inspirational-courage-in-the-singing-of-a-pop-song/ https://www.thejc.com/news/israel/eden-golan-israels-eurovision-entry-determined-to-perform-in-the-face-of-death-threats-i8lx5bsj

All three sources call it a pop ballad

Thank you! Or-Shalem (talk) 04:23, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Or-Shalem: I'll get to it. Thanks for the recommendation. Cheers, and carpe diem! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 04:38, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I think we should just say "pop" in the genre= parameter as per ballad and sentimental ballad, "ballad" is not considered a genre on the English Wikipedia. If "ballad" is considered such crucial information, by all means, work "pop ballad" into the lead. That's a description of the genre and style of song. But leave out "ballad" from the genre parameter. Ss112 18:34, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It's sourced as a pop ballad and there's a wikipedia article on it. I don't see the problem. Or-Shalem (talk) 16:53, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you Or-Shalem (talk) 16:53, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please revert the genre change or just remove it entirely. Pop is so nondescript, it's better not to have it at all.

I don't see the problem with "pop ballad" used, as it is more descriptive and precise than simply "pop." Furthermore I've seen "ballad" used on other articles before and the sentimental ballad page says nothing about it not being a genre (it is literally called a "style" there) and the song is cited as being such universally.

Having "pop" is worse than nothing at all and I don't appreciate the genre change without a proper discussion. Please either remove it or revert it back; it's misleading right now. Or-Shalem (talk) 17:08, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]