Talk:1920 Columbus Panhandles season

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 03:11, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this article. Here are the issues I found:

• "season was the franchises inaugural season" was the franchise's
  • Fixed.
    —Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 04:25, 20 April 2012 (UTC)
• "lost 5 straight until a" lost five straight
  • Fixed.
    —Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 04:25, 20 April 2012 (UTC)
• "Triangles to have to ball" having the ball on the 5-yard line sounds better here.
  • Fixed.
    —Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 04:25, 20 April 2012 (UTC)
• "due to the clock to halftime ran out." due to the clock running out sounds better.
  • Fixed.
    —Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 04:25, 20 April 2012 (UTC)
• "Frank Bacon returned it for a 60-yard touchdown" returned what? A kickoff, pass, something else?
  • Fixed.
    —Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 04:25, 20 April 2012 (UTC)
• Frank McCormick links to the wrong guy; fix so it links to Frank McCormick (American football).
  • Re-linked.
    —Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 04:25, 20 April 2012 (UTC)
• "Even though the Nesser brothers "stared on several occasions", " that sounds odd to me; can you double-check the quote?
  • Ah, you're right. Fixed.
    —Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 04:25, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

I'll put the article on hold for five days. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:11, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for reviewing this article, Wizardman. If there are any other issues, let me know, and I will try and fix them as soon as possible.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 04:25, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

Everything looks good now so I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:36, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

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