Talk:1858 Atlantic hurricane season
1858 Atlantic hurricane season has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: October 3, 2014. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 03:07, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
- "was one of few seasons" - say how many, and say "on record"
- "The first system, Hurricane One" - seems kinda redundant, since we know every storm was a hurricane. Why not - "The first hurricane"?
- "Two of the cyclones has only " --> "has" --> "have"
- Why does the strongest storm in the infobox not have mph?
- Why no mention of H1's peak winds in the prose?
- H2 looks like it formed closer to Newfoundland than Azores. Perhaps mention that distance as well?
- For duration for those single point storms, perhaps just list the one day?
- "It is believed that a tropical storm developed on September 14" - where?
- " and dissipated later that day about 350 mi (565 km) off Novia Scotia" - first, typo, and second, it looks closer to Newfoundland
- H5 peak intensity?
- "Later on October 23, it passed just west of Bermuda,[5] bring gale force winds and rough seas to the island, damaging several vessels." - poor grammar
All in all a good read for such an old season. Lemme know when you get these comments and I'll pass! ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 03:07, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
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