Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/May 23, 2012

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This is written like hagiography and should strive for a more nuetral tone, in summary. Too many adjectives and adjectival phases for a short summary. It makes the pedia look a little ridiculous. Alanscottwalker (talk) 18:23, 23 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]