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Gilbert du Motier, marquis de Lafayette[edit]

Passed --Eurocopter (talk) 15:00, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I worked on this article heavily about a month back with spotlight, when it achieved GA. Since then work has been done to improve and clarify the prose. The article has undergone an informative PR session. I feel now that it is nearly ready for A and FAC. I hope you agree. Lazulilasher (talk) 14:30, 27 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments I've fixed up the footnote formatting, but can you fill out the refs for 25, 83 and 99? YellowMonkey (bananabucket) 07:11, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for fixing the refs. The references mentioned above have been filled. Lazulilasher (talk) 18:01, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support, a well written article that meets the A-class criteria. JonCatalán^(Talk) 18:24, 5 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Couple problems: Hessian, Nathanial Greene, and a couple of other terms should only be linked the first time they appear, and the phrase "Lafayette rebuked attempts by Cornwallis to capture him in Richmond, by evading the British forces," sounds rather awkward and should be rephrased. Otherwise it looks good, good luck on taking it to FA. Joe (Talk) 01:40, 18 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I rephrased to just "Lafayette evaded Cornwallis' attempts to capture him", the "British forces" was redudantant. I've also spent the last few days working on c/e and tightening up the French Revolution section. Lazulilasher (talk) 14:39, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support YellowMonkey (click here to chose Australia's next top model!) 03:49, 20 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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