Wikipedia:WikiProject India/Peer review/S. P. Balasubrahmanyam

S. P. Balasubrahmanyam[edit]

Article has been cleaned up and expanded few months ago. Deserves atleast a C-class. Thalapathi (Ping Back) 11:37, 27 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Ravichandar84

The textual part of the article is extremely small. Most of the article is made of lists. Please expand the textual part a bit more.
As per WP:MOS, the lead section should completely summarize the article.
Sources are extremely few. Claims like "Balasubrahmanyan has a daughter Pallavi and a son S. P. B. Charan" should be properly sourced.
Sources should be reliable. I am not sure if Aristopia.com, Networkbase.info and 600024.com are reliable. It will be better if you consult someone about the sources. Meanwhile, I feel that most of the links you have added to "Futher reading" can be used as sources for further expansion of the article.

Done

If atleast two or three of these concerns are addressed, I think the article should be good enough for a C-class. Regards. -The Enforcer _{Office of the secret service} 12:38, 2 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you Ravi!! Even I was thinking of using the links which are used in "External links" as sources. There is still a lot to deal with article. --Thalapathi (Ping Back) 13:31, 2 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

No, not "External Links"! I am referring to "Further reading" section.-The Enforcer _{Office of the secret service} 14:12, 2 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah I was referring to "Further Reading" section. Just a small confusion. --Thalapathi (Ping Back) 15:42, 2 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]