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Leon Sullivan[edit]

I have requested a peer review because I am hoping to get this article to at least B status.

Dovcamp (talk) 05:34, 12 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Javascript review[edit]

The following suggestions were generated with the aid of a semi-automatic javascript program.

  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The lead should have an appropriate number of paragraphs and summarize the article as a whole.[?]
  • Please add some images. For example, there are some free use ones available of the seminary.[?]
  • Please consider adding {{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}} along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.[?]
  • Headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.[?]
  • Ideally, you should provide footnotes for quotes and parts of the text where you refer to a source. For example, "which he referred to as "Selective Patronage"." and "He said, "I found that we needed training..." should be referenced.

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan (talk) 15:24, 20 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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