Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/Berkley Bedell

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The result was fail due to lack of comment.

Berkley Bedell[edit]

This article got GA status. I posted it under peer review weeks ago, but no one has responded. I don't know why that is, but I'd like this article to get A status, so I put it here for further review. Thanks. Minute Lake 21:52, 4 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - extant red links could be removed. Also think that article might well focus a bit too much attention on political career. More information about nature of business and how and why it expanded, and maybe about post-political career if such is available, would certainly be welcome. Information about when he married, and other details regarding personal life, also seems to be lacking. John Carter 21:14, 12 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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