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Windows 7[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to assist with the development of the article and would like to know what needs work.

Thanks, StewdioMACK (talk) 07:56, 29 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: The lead goes a little too in depth individually listing the things that were added starting with "other new features", it seems like this should just be summarized by saying something along the lines of "several enhancements were added", possibly listing something, but not so much. B137 (talk) 03:32, 3 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]