Wikipedia:Peer review/Sky Captain and the World of Tomorrow/archive1
Sky Captain and the World of Tomorrow[edit]
I think that this article has a good change of achieving FA status and with some help in the form of helpful comments, edits, etc. we could greatly improve the quality of this article. I think that the quantity is already there to some degree. Any help and/or suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Count Ringworm 15:00, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
No references, and the plot is overlong with pictures just strewn for prettiness. Put all the cultural references and cite them before putting them in an appropriate section too. Wiki-newbie 16:04, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
- The lead is too short, it should summarize the article. The plot is overly long, there should not be a scene-by-scene retelling of the movie. The production section should probably be rename "development" as it discusses preproduction as well, and include the influences. The performance section should be called "reception" discussing both the subjective successes and failures, citing notable critics, and the objective successes and failures like box office gross and DVD sales. Mistakes within the movie should not be listed unless pointed out by a notable critic, in which case it should be listed in the reception. The article needs a lot of references and inline citations to weed out original research and speculation. I wouldn't worry about FA status for a while, the article isn't close to GA status, yet. Jay32183 19:46, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
- I've added citations for all of the quotes in this article and for certain factoids as well. Count Ringworm 19:37, 2 April 2007 (UTC)