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SNK Playmore[edit]

Looking for ideas on what to expand and various other ways to improve. Manmonk 07:07, 21 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]


  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
  • As per WP:MOS, please do not link words in headings.
  • This article is a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form). For example, see "Games".
  • There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged. For example, Games, Subsidiaries and related corporations is/are a bit short.