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Rockefeller Foundation[edit]

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I've just completed a major cleanup and edit of this page which had a dicey past of COI editors and other issues. I still need to run down a few citations but I think it's coming along. Would appreciate any suggestions and pointers. Andre🚐 15:30, 18 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Z1720[edit]

These comments are based on a quick scan of the article:

Citation needed templates need to be resolved.
There should probably be a citation at the end of every paragraph (except the lede)
"People affiliated with the foundation" needs a lot more citations.
Avoid short, one or two sentence paragraphs.

@Andrevan: I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 04:17, 29 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Andre🚐 14:41, 29 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]