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Mono (Japanese band)[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I feel the article, while fairly informative at present, could be expanded upon and improved, hopefully with the help of a peer review. I have contributed considerably to the article, and would greatly appreciate any comments/criticism with regards to advancing it to (at least) Good Article status.

Thank you, Thom (talk) 01:50, 26 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Esuzu Hello, I am Esuzu and I will try to help you with this article. Other comments are very welcome. I will add comments now and then but I am quite bust atm so it might take time sometimes. Esuzu (talk • contribs) 10:45, 27 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

References, Wikipedia:Citing sources is good to read.

First of all, references needs to be according to Template:Cite web. Just bare references will not do. (I made some for you but for example ref 2 still needs to be done)
Ref 6 is dead.
ref 9-17 is only images. We can not use that as a good source. (Wikipedia:Secondary source#Primary.2C secondary and tertiary sources is good to read.) In wikipedia we can only say and summarise what other people already have said. Thus the whole "Instrumentation" section needs new references.
Almost the whole History section is missing references. You need to have at least one closing reference in each paragraph. Take a look at, for example, Confessions on a Dance Floor for see how a GA article should be referenced.