Wikipedia:Peer review/Far-right politics in Israel/archive1

Far-right politics in Israel

I've listed this article for peer review because I want other people to look at my article and see how they can improve it

Thanks, Alon Alush (talk)

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

• "bringing Israel's 38 years of military rule over the Gaza Strip to a halt." Needs a citation.
• Ref 10: The Jewish Library is not considered a reliable source according to WP:RS/P. This should be removed.
• Section names like "Criticism" are not considered WP:NPOV because it suggests negativity. I would suggest reworking this section into something like "Commentary" or something similar.
• Per WP:LEDECITE, the lede doesn't need citations because the information should be in the rest of the article. I think these can be removed and incorporated into the article, while the lede is a summary of the body's information.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 01:16, 11 May 2024 (UTC)