Wikipedia:Peer review/Boise, Idaho/archive1

Boise[edit]

Being the capital of Idaho, Boise deserves a top-notch article. How can wikipedians make it top-notch? 11kowrom 16:30, 2 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Honestly, to tell you the truth, I think the article is an excellant. I think the article is fairly detailed and covers a nice range of topics. However, I also noticed that due to the large number of differant topics mentioned in this article, some were more detailed than others, perhaps you could balance it out a little more. Also, you should also add a History section to the article and possibly talk a little bit about how the government works if you want.Hope this helps. Socom49 17:09, 2 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Not enough references and citations, and the ones that exist are not in the proper format (see Cite.php). That will keep it from FA. PDXblazers 01:15, 3 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 01:28, 9 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

not one single footnote, full of external jumps that need to be footnotes, some sections are stubby, date linking are not in proper wiki format.Rlevse 12:10, 13 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

No footnotes/references! Sections such as Media need to be expanded (and the main article of the section looks pretty large, so it shouldn't be a problem). Also there's a scary number of redlinks in Culture, and the section titles should only have their first letter capitalised, but I fixed that. CloudNine 19:31, 23 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Start by looking at related US-based featured articles such as Ann Arbor. Try and adapt the content from there to Boise. =Nichalp «Talk»= 19:18, 26 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]