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Angels in Neon Genesis Evangelion[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I recently expanded it by translating it from it.wiki and copy-editing it thanks to the guild. I think it needs to be improved before a possible FLN, especially in terms of language and exposition.

Thanks, TeenAngels1234 (talk) 19:22, 3 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Nice expansion. Not sure if it might be useful considering most of these characters are "monsters of the week". If the Angels were explored in a different way in other works related to the anime then they could be more notable for the FL demands. By the way, I suggest to comment on Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Hyouka episodes/archive1 to exchange feedback.Tintor2 (talk) 22:11, 3 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Tintor2: Yeah. I meant FL. Errata corrige, sorry. Anyway, good advice! I'll try.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 11:52, 4 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]