Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Professional diving/archive1

Professional diving[edit]

I'd like to nominate this article, I believe it's a good article and I've spent a considerable time rewriting it into a decent and hopefully easy to understand, well illustrated article, the images are all public domain, and I have spent time finding the best PD images available for the article. --Kind Regards - Heligoland | Talk | Contribs 02:35, 27 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Comment. I didn't get beyond the first sentence, "Professional Diving is a type of diving where the diver is paid for their work," which strikes me as a bit weak. Also, is the section on equipment necessary? I assume this is all covered in diving. Semperf 03:07, 27 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Object, uncited, doesn't conform to WP:LAYOUT, WP:MOS, WP:MSH. Sandy (Talk) 03:55, 27 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Object, if for no other reason that the vast majority of the article is unreferenced. -- Kicking222 16:15, 27 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]