Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/1957 World Series/archive1

1957 World Series[edit]

A well-written top class article, thuroughly researched with good and interesting information. A couple of pictures and a couple of interesting facts. Very featurable article. CollieBreath 04:20, 10 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Object. This article isn't ready to be an FA at this point; no references, one section is marked as a stub, etc... Take a look at some of the recently featured articles to see what kind of comprehensiveness we look for here, CollieBreath. —Bunchofgrapes (talk) 04:33, 10 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Strong object per Bunchofgrapes. Short introduction with inappropriately placed "Umpires" "MVP" and "Television" sections (more appropriate as an infobox), zero references and one external link, and some poor prose (Statements such as "His only slightly worse performance than in Game 5 was incredible" are POV). Rampart 04:57, 10 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Object per above objections. In addition to the need for references, there are many red links. The introduction needs to be expanded to at least 3 paragraphs. The signed photograph really isn't too clear. With photographs of this nature you could easily claim fair use. In addition, inline citations would be quite useful! Good start to the article, though! *Exeunt* Ganymead ^Dialogue? 14:43, 10 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]