User talk:Taquechel.k

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Nice work on Neutrophil extracellular traps. I appreciate your removed of the phrase "It has long been known" from the article. There are a few things that you could do to further improve things.

The lead section of the article is supposed to provide an overview of all the major points of the article. While you added a lot of information about NETosis, it doesn't seem like a proportionate amount of content was added to the lead. So it would improve things if you could expanded the lead a bit.

You should also make sure that every statement in the article is directly connected to a supporting citation. For example, you added "NETs also have a role in thrombosis", but there's no supporting source. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:45, 26 June 2017 (UTC)