User talk:Suisse514

Good day from Carl

HelloCMTucker (talk) 19:13, 25 January 2011 (UTC) Good morning from Carl Anderson (User:carl67lp). 25 Jan 2011 11:18 EST —Preceding undated comment added 16:18, 25 January 2011 (UTC).

Hi from Qi

Hi, Shanyang, curious about the meaning of your user name! See you tomorrow!qiaoqi 02:58, 25 January 2011 (UTC)

Hi from Sandy

Hi Suisse, this is oceanski (Sandy) :) We are taking the same class this semester (Prof. Bauer's class). See you next Tue.! 21:35, 23 January 2011

Hi from Alison

This is Football1502 (Alison). Considering we are the only 3 on here so far, I figured I'd give this a try and edit your page. Interesting so far! Football1502 (talk) 22:35, 24 January 2011 (UTC) Football1502

Hi from Ben

Hey! It's Ben. I'm looking forward to this class! See you tomorrow Rick.james850 18:18, 24 January 2011

Welcome from Anna

Hello Suisse514 (Shan Yang)! Welcome. (I will address you as Suisse514 to avoid confusion.) I am very pleased to be your mentor, and will help any way I can. I will keep an eye on your talk page, so please feel free to reply to this message here.

I will be watching all relevant course pages, but I encourage you to post on my talk page to ask questions.

Please let me know how I can help. For live IRC chat, please give me a heads-up on my talk page. Best wishes and good luck with the course. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 00:10, 25 January 2011 (UTC)

Your recent edits

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Welcome from Shinya

Hi, Yang. This is Shinya (Tomozojisan). I try to make a comment on user pages. Thank you! --Tomozojisan (talk) 22:05, 25 January 2011 (UTC)

Baxter's Law - Anna's comments

You are doing very well! Here are some tweaks you can make to the article.

• A lead is a good idea. That is a short paragraph at the top of the article (with no heading) summarizing the contents beneath. (See other articles for an example.)

• Highest level headings start with two equal signs (example: ==Origin==)

• You can highlight Bell Doctrine if you like.

• Give it a good read aloud. This will help you catch small mistakes: "...Baxter's law theoretically is applied to applies to a ..."

• "internalizing complementary externalities" is a redlink, and that's fine if you think it has a good chance of becoming an article.

• Toss in some more links, such as AT&T, Stanford University, etc.

• Try to add inline references (see this. Also, if you want a more detailed reference, try this:

<ref>{{Cite web | title = Apple tree fruit | url=http://apples.com/apple-trees.html | accessdate = 20 February 2011 }}</ref>

Insanely detailed references are here. Just glue one of those in between and stick it at the end of the text you wish to reference.

• I see external such as Internalization of Complementary Externalities. First letter capitalization, after that, only caps if really necessary is the rule of thumb.

• You can delete the orphan template at the very top of the article.

• Finally, I see a couple of commas with no spaces after. Very minor.

Great stuff. Keep up the good work! Anna Frodesiak (talk) 14:54, 22 February 2011 (UTC)

Keep up the work

Nice work so far; you may want to proof your edits one more time (missing spaces, "an" instead of "a" etc.) --JMBauer (talk) 21:38, 22 February 2011 (UTC) Additional thoughts: I really like your entry (still needs some minor edits). One concern that I have is the following: if you took language verbatim, make sure that you put text in quotation marks and provide a reference to the source. If you use your own language but rely on sombody else's writing, make sure you add a reference (but no quotation marks). You cite three very important papers. Good going! --JMBauer (talk) 22:01, 1 March 2011 (UTC)

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Spectrum auction

Hello again. I see you've been busy. I like the contributions you made to Spectrum auction. Here are a few comments:

• Try to add inline citations by placing them at the end of the text, instead of at the bottom of the article in the references section.
• Give your edits a quick once-over. (I see a few missing spaces: "... rights(licences)...", "... wavelengths]]and to assign...", "...process.Spectrum...". "...lotteries]].Since...", "...collusion.When...".)
• Replace "... represent a huge advance in..." with less astonishing wording. ("Huge" is considered to be a peacock word.)
• A line space should be present between the last bit of text in a section and a new section heading.
• Again, it's always a good idea to read aloud the new text. (I make really awful mistakes that I catch this way. Sometimes I can't believe I actually missed it, and suspect some sort of brain damage. :)
• Section headings usually don't require italics.
• Omit (when possible) the name of the article in section headings. (e.g. Disadvantage of Spectrum Auction --> Disadvantages)
• Try to avoid using the same word many times in a single sentence. (e.g. "...up for bid simultaneously and bidders submit new higher bids on desired number of licences, bumping the standing high bidder....")

Please don't be put off by these comments. You are doing very well, and are making good contributions to the project. About 1,000 people each month read what you've written, and that's a very good thing! [1][2]

If another editor were to submit comments on my contributions, it would look something like this:

• Anna, tsk tsk tsk, sloppy, sloppy, sloppy.
• Anna! What the heck are you doing? You call those edits??
• Anna!! Just stop! You're killing the article!!!
• Anna!!! It's pretty obvious that you're drunk. Maybe you should just stop editing. Have you considered gardening, or maybe buying some crayons?

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 00:47, 16 March 2011 (UTC)

Additional feedback from JM Bauer

You added substantive information to the spectrum management entry. A final proofing would have helped (I fixed a few minor snags and clarified some of the language). Good work, though, overall! --JMBauer (talk) 19:26, 29 March 2011 (UTC)

The article in your sandbox

Hello. I can see you're working on the article in your sandbox. If you have an questions at this point, or need some help, please just ask.

Best, Anna Frodesiak (talk) 00:20, 2 May 2011 (UTC)

Congrats!

Congratulations! It's an article! Let me know if you want some notes on improvement. But I must say, it looks very good. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 06:44, 3 May 2011 (UTC)

Your recent edits

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Spectrum auction: More comments from Anna

• In Spectrum auction#USA, there could be mention of Policies promoting wireless broadband#Freeing space.
• Dig up sources to support the Spectrum auction#Innovation section.
• Sweden section is supported by a blog reference. Consider another source. Also, the figure USD 38.60 is not in the source.
• Lots of interwiki links are needed. Add ones that go to articles like US Congress, but not world or value.
• Rephrase some sentences to be more encyclopedic, such as "...get these services off the ground..." and "...been a hot topic...".
• Ensure that the date and currency formats are consistent throughout the article.

It is a well-organized, informative, and thoughtful article. Very well done!! Anna Frodesiak (talk) 00:51, 4 May 2011 (UTC)

An award for you

	The WikiPen Your contributions to Wikipedia will inform visitors for a long time to come. Well done. :) Anna Frodesiak (talk) 09:11, 6 May 2011 (UTC)

Page hit statistics

I just thought you'd like to know how many people read what you have written:

Page hit statistics

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 09:17, 6 May 2011 (UTC)