User talk:Rafamatalon1234/sandbox

Rafa things are looking great! At first glance, I would love to see some examples of when/how traditional music encompasses folk music. Maybe add some specific examples of songs or artists in general. Also, I would love to hear of specific cultures that are known for passing along folk music throughout its generations. Great start, and I look forward to reading what you write in the upcoming weeks! Jaredgoz (talk) 02:32, 1 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

You've provided many hyperlinks for the specific words, which is great. I liked the pictures on the side that actually connected with the content.Koko413 (talk) 15:47, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The sentence structure is really strong and it is fact driven. I also like how you have internal links. I think you could definitely expand by maybe adding some examples but overall I think it is really good! Isabelleshegog (talk) 15:50, 3 April 2019 (UTC)Isabelle[reply]

I like how you added a caption to the image on your page. Also, your page is very detailed and clear because of the many sources you used. One sugguestion I would have is maybe including a hyperlink on "folk music" somewhere. Good job! Fariha34 (talk) 15:58, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your paragraphs are well written. I enjoyed your use of hyperlinks and sources. You may benefit from adding a few examples of this genre like some songs or artists. Another idea would be to add in some cultural references. Good Work! Ashleydavidsongwu (talk) 16:06, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

You have provided a ton of information on this topic. I am now fully educated on folk music and its attributes. I do not think this sandbox needs improving, you have included a numerous amount of sources and personal references. Charlier118 (talk) 16:14, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This is awesome! I have a few minor edits/suggestions: -"According to the ICTM (...), traditional music IS songs and tunes..." -Where does the quotation marks at the end of the first paragraph come from? (You left an open quotation mark) '] -"[Folk music in England] HAS transmitted from that time until today." -"Great names SUCH AS Bob Dylan, etc." -You don't need to capitalize music in the last paragraph. Also: -How can culture transmit styles? Do you mean styles, pithces and cadences of the folk music genre become part of peoples' culture? I would just make sure you explain that a little more clearly. All in all, great work though! Keep it up! :)Isamouse79 (talk) 16:21, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I liked how you used a lot of hyperlinks on your work. You gave me tons of information on folk music. Maybe you can add more examples to your work. But other than that, it looks very good to me.ChristalCao (talk) 16:29, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Great job! I like your content and the examples you detail the main point. Folk music has been completed show in your content. If you could separate your paragraph more clearly will be better.Samuelzhao000005 (talk) 16:36, 3 April 2019 (UTC)Samuelzhao000005[reply]

You have really good information and fact based wiring in here. I love the image you decided to insert as well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wohlina (talk • contribs) 16:31, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I found the explanation of folk and traditional music kind of confusing. You might need to dumb it down or go more in depth.SocksOfDeath (talk) 16:35, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Great work! Very fact driven and well organized! I think there is not much that needs modifying, howevr, just make sure to reread the page for small surface errors. For example" Traditional Folk music usually refers to songs composed in the 20th century, which tends to be written as universal truths and big issues of the time it was composed." Make sure you use eithe plural or singular throughout the sentence. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lorenaramirezl (talk • contribs) 01:15, 6 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Good job! Maybe add some more examples? It looks great though! Sydneycurrie5 (talk) 20:26, 7 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]