User talk:Kristinavalle22

This user is a student editor in Laurentian_University/Seminars_in_Forensic_Science_(2022W) .

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Hello, Kristinavalle22, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:43, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

Hi Kristinavalle22,

I have provided a peer review of your Forensic Serology article. I think that you addressed some major concerns with references that were present in the article before you edited it. I like that there are so many links to other relevant articles and that you added a section for urine detection because it was mentioned in the lead section. A few things: I would consider adding information about immunochromatography techniques for urine and blood, reviewing the first two references to ensure they are reliable secondary sources, and omitting the word "you" in the urine detection section to ensure that it sounds more formal.

Overall, great job!

Basil B Caraway (talk) 02:48, 6 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]