User talk:JosephMohan/sandbox

Feedback on Draft Page

It looks like you're going with the Hadar Formation, which is great -- there's a page for Hadar, Ethiopia that has a dead link to the Hadar Formation, and it's not very well developed. In your draft outline, you've demonstrated a nice handle of how to structure a page, link to other pages, and all the other skills you'll need. Think about your references and what imagery you might add that could be helpful (you can check for CC photos on Flickr, or use your own!). Let me know when you're ready for feedback. IceAgeDoc (talk) 21:45, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

Evaluating an Article

Really nice work with this assignment. I appreciated the "magna" and "minutiae" framework! You're paying attention to all the right things -- missing references, language and accuracy, organizational improvements, and the relationship between the article you evaluated and other related articles.

It also looks like you've got a good handle on wikipedia formatting, though I'd recommend using headings (two equals signs, your title, and two equals signs) to separate your major topics in the sandbox (or your talk page). Nice work! IceAgeDoc (talk) 01:03, 2 April 2018 (UTC)