User talk:Gg808/Cherokee Female Seminary
Feedback from Dr. Hyde[edit]
You’ve made enormous strides with pulling this together. I can see all the sections laid out about the Cherokee Female Academy and the sources that you have begun to add. Great! FYI - I see Cherokee Female Academy and Cherokee National Female Academy used as its name, so just check....
1) Lay out the structure of your article or the new chunks of an old article with an Introduction and titles for the parts you want to add or rewrite
You’ve made huge progress here. I can see all the sections laid out about the school and how it evolved nd the sources that you have begun to add. Great!
2) Added new, high-quality sources (books, articles, authoritative websites)
As you add more citations to the paragraphs here, look for more journal articles about Cherokee education as well as more books and articles about the controversies around women's education.
New book with a useful article that OU has: Janda and Loughlin, This Land is Her Land. 2021. Article in the book is Farina King, “Loyal Countrywoman: Rachel Eaton, Alumna of the Cherokee Female Seminary” (Her notes look helpful)
3. Written 50-60% of what you hope to add
Absolutely did this!!
4) Thinking about linking as opposed to creating too much background
Here is where you might need to consider how much background people can get from other Wikipedia articles. How much history of the Cherokee nation do you need?
5) Started to clean up a few paragraphs
'You can decide whether you want to do this on the mainspace or in your sandbox, but the clean up and fixing spelling and writing errors takes a while.'
GRADE FOR DRAFT (POINTS) : 80 Afh1858 (talk) 19:27, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Afh1858 (talk) 19:30, 8 November 2023 (UTC)