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Your submission at Articles for creation: 2023 North Kerry Senior Football Championship (December 23)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Mach61 were:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Facebook cannot be used as a source

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Mach61 (talk) 02:42, 23 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Fox&Pheasant! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Mach61 (talk) 02:42, 23 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

TONE/MOS[edit]

Hi. And welcome. If you haven't reviewed the Wikipedia guidelines on WP:TONE, WP:NEUTRALITY, and WP:ATTRIBUTINGPOV, please do. Please also consider reviewing the WP:GAELICNEUTRAL guideline from the WikiProject Gaelic games project/community. In short, terms like "golden era", "glory years", "barren years", "special day together", "finest achievement" or "unlikely victory" are not in keeping with related guidelines. While such turns of phrase may appear in some sources, and may reflect the tone-of-voice of match day reports or parish histories or club websites, they do not reflect Wikipedia's tone-of-voice. Which is factual and neutral. If such terms are used, then the opinions/editorial/feelings expressed need to be supported, "quoted" and clearly attributed. (Also, see WP:OLINK for why every instance of Shannon Rangers GAA shouldn't be linked/relinked in a single article). Thanks. Guliolopez (talk) 21:55, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the advice, still learning. Also, thanks for doing all the editing on my submissions, much appreciated. Fox&Pheasant (talk) 22:02, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

OK. Also (and just FYI I guess), except as covered in WP:VALIDALT, if you have previously edited Wikipedia from another account, it may be appropriate to provide notice of any previous/existing profiles. Thanks. Guliolopez (talk) 22:21, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:2023 North Kerry Senior Football Championship[edit]

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 03:05, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]