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Final Wikipedia addition BY ALVARO MONTIJANO[edit]
As I am going to state in the following lines, I think my additions and the final content of the article fill Wikipedia's content gap as the information is detailed and linked to the title (Fall Prevention). I added a lot of information regarding stroke recovery exercises, as well as about the section about support from friends and family. I think those were not spoken at all and I consider they are a really important fact when it comes to falls and help. About sections that were not there before, as I also removed some content that was unnecessary because it did not apport anything new or was not linked t the topic. I used more than 15 new sources to rely on the information I add and I also added pictures to exemplify what I wrote. Everything in the article has a reliable backup source and compares it all to other information previously written. The information I added as the following:
- I added the "Fear of falling (Basophobia)" and cited it, located first on the "Risk factors of falls" - Added citations on the "Healthy young individuals" - Added the "Limitations in mobility" citations and content to the "older adults" section. - Added Reduced muscle strength" citation and content to the "older adults" section. - Added "Poor reaction time" citation and comment to the "older adults" section. - Added the whole section and citations of the "Stroke recovery" - Added the whole section of "Support from close people" - Added all citations and last paragraph of the "Safety Technology" section. - I removed the “Lighting” section as I think it is not important information. Normally accidents happen at home and the elderly already know where everything is and always have the lights on. - I wanted to add a picture of a senior park at span but it had copyright. - Added the whole "exercises for prevention" paragraph. - Citations added where needed (there were some facts with no backup sources that did not make it reliable until I cited them). - I improve previous paragraphs like “Risk factors of falls“ and “Safety Technology” - Corrected many spelling mistakes that were in the original article.
Below are all my APA citations I used in the article:
Team, A. A. V. E. (2020, November 30). What's the Difference Between Bifocals & Trifocals? All About Vision. https://www.allaboutvision.com/lenses/multifocal.htm.
Institute of Medicine (US) Division of Health Promotion and Disease Prevention, . (1992, January 1). Falls in Older Persons: Risk Factors and Prevention. The Second Fifty Years: Promoting Health and Preventing Disability. https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK235613/.
Segev-Jacubovski, O., Herman, T., Yogev-Seligmann, G., Mirelman, A., Giladi, N., & Hausdorff, J. M. (2011, July). The interplay between gait, falls and cognition: can cognitive therapy reduce fall risk? Expert review of neurotherapeutics. https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3163836/.
Olavide, P. (2018). Los Parques de Mayores. UPO. https://www.upo.es/export/portal/com/bin/portal/fdep/alumnos/Muestra_Trabajo_Fin_Grado/1424431349597_mod-tfg_8_20122013_calificacion_9.20.pdf.
Prevent Accidents in the Bathroom with These Toilet Safety Rails: Updated for 2020. AgingInPlace.org. (2019, March 4). https://aginginplace.org/prevent-accidents-in-the-bathroom-with-these-toilet-safety-rails/.
McKinney, R. (2020, July 1). Exciting Advancements in Fall Prevention Technology. Safesite. https://safesitehq.com/fall-prevention-technology/.
ME. Tinetti, M. S., L. Clemson, L. M., TM. Gill, C. S. W., MC. Nevitt, S. R. C., RW. Sattin, J. G. R., M. Speechley, M. T., … AZ. Monson, J. P. (1988, January 1). A need to improve the assessment of environmental hazards for falls on stairs and in bathrooms: results of a scoping review. BMC Geriatrics. https://bmcgeriatr.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/s12877-018-0958-1.
.ORG, N. C. O. A. FALLS PREVENTION CONVERSATION GUIDE FOR CAREGIVERS. NCOA. https://www.ncoa.org/wp-content/uploads/Falls-Prevention-Conversation-Guide-for-Caregivers_Final.pdf.
Rasche, P., Mertens, A., Bröhl, C., Theis, S., Seinsch, T., Wille, M., … Knobe, M. (2017, May 8). The "Aachen fall prevention App" - a Smartphone application app for the self-assessment of elderly patients at risk for ground level falls. Patient safety in surgery. https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5422970.
Tricarea, G. (2016, March 16). Caídas en personas mayores: riesgo, causas y prevención. Geriatricarea. https://www.geriatricarea.com/2016/03/16/caidas-en-personas-mayores-riesgos-causas-y-prevencion/.
Medline, P. (2019). Caídas: MedlinePlus en español. MedlinePlus. https://medlineplus.gov/spanish/falls.html.
., S. M. S. S. W. J. R. K. H. E. W. (2017). The impact of mobility limitations on health outcomes amongolder adults. ELSEVIER. https://doi.org/https://reader.elsevier.com/reader/sd/pii/S0197457217302057?token=273BB4BC86581725ECC92E10C6A80776EB12E00C6406F5D1428BABCF1F003957B95162D153C52693B6FAEC4122FE8FFC