User:Monkeygirl11

Article critique

When I was in the Philippines, I always wear long sleeves shirts and use an umbrella to protect my skin from too much sun exposure. That all change when I arrived here in America. I was surprised by the way people dressed up here because they love to sit or lie down in places where there is a plenty of sunshine, especially during the summer season. I asked my husband why people here like to stay under the sunlight? He told me for sun tanning. That made me interested in what is sun tanning all about and its benefits. I visited sun tanning in wikipedia to find answers and found articles. While reading, I came across some words or phrases that are spelled wrong or incorrect punctuation, lack of citation and too many reference that nowhere to find or lack of information.

spelling errors and punctuation

While I am reading about the cultural history of sun tanning, I came across a few words that are spelled wrong and that distracted me a bit. Incorrect grammar could cause the reader confusion and second guessing because the content of the sentence is unclear and it could also mean something else. It is important to be grammatically correct because to obtained a writer has to make sure everything that he/she is trying to convey is correct and error free. It will save the reader time and stress and also will build confidence on a writer.

citation

I was interested to know that the author talk about UVB can causes skin aging but unhappily to found out that he/she did not put any references or citation. I also found two off them that needs to be cite to prove that this article is reliable.

Too many references that nowhere to find or lack of information

When I was reading the articles, I am so interested to find out for more information, so I tried to open all the link  that the author have provided but surprisingly, some of the reference were unable to open. Also the reference does not direct you to the very own discussion it would be better if it will bring you to the specific point of the topic.

summary

In summary, I learned about sun tanning history and how it works on our body however, I am interested to know more about this topic and I am looking forward to get more information but is not being provided.Grammar mistake that I found on this article  would have been prevented if it was examined carefully and so readers will not be distracted.