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Declined by KylieTastic 35 days ago. Last edited by KylieTastic 35 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Heaven Hall, also known as Heaven the Goat, is one of the most influential people of this time. He is the greatest of all time in everything he does, especially weightlifting, wrestling, and playing European football. This article will describe the rise of Heaven Hall (Heaven the Goat).

Early Childhood[edit]

Heaven Hall was born on February 5th, 2009. Even at birth, Heaven Hall could bench 45 pounds 10 times. This strength only kept on growing. When Heaven was in 3rd grade, he was known as the King of the Playground. His rank kept on increasing until he got to the 6th grade. In 6th grade, Heaven Hall wasn't well known and was getting bullied by random popular kids.

The rise of the GOAT[edit]

Heaven was getting bullied but suddenly, in the middle of summer, Heaven started his ultimate training to become the greatest of all time. This training continued until the ending of his 7th grade year. Heaven was benching 135 pounds, power cleaning 145, and squatting 185 with ease. People respected him, even the one and only Lord Diego.

Conclusion[edit]

The greatest comeback in human history occurred in Heaven Hall, and many of our future generations ought to remember it.