User:Asrogers23/Jim Henson/notes

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intro

p2

rephrased, cut unnecessary info

p3

added innovation, reworded

early life

removed year 1975 to more accurately reflect source

career - education

p2

clarify his early puppet and school experience

split into separate subsection

early career

created p1 for WTOP-TV, he was hired initially as a puppeteer not a puppet maker at WTOP

and p2 to introduce Sam and Friends

p3

removed Proscenium arch link, replaced with Puppet theatre, add info about Henson pioneering the use of puppetry that hid the puppeteer from view of the camera and could could interact w/ human actors, reference

changed wording of "live and sensitivity" quote

added Kermit info

p4

rephrased for accuracy and relevance, added block quote

p5

clarified Europe trip, expanded on relationship with Jane

TV and muppets

p1

added citation

p2

rephrasing

sesame street

p1

removed tangential sentence about a specific puppet performer

expansion of audience

p2

expanded on Muppet Show cast to indicate character prominence and tie in the mention of Animal

transition to the big screen

p3

removed line break to append last sentence

p4

moved to its own paragraph, added sources

personal life

added details about marriage, with source