Template:Did you know nominations/iPhone 11 Pro

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 18:01, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

iPhone 11 Pro

  • ... that the iPhone 11 Pro is the first iPhone to feature a "Pro" designation, which was previously only reserved for larger Apple devices (such as the iPad Pro)? [1]
  • reviewed: Exempt- fewer than 5 DYK credits (this is my 4th DYK)
  • Comment: As of now, the XTools article info says I wrote 50.6% of the article. I wrote the hook.

5x expanded by Taewangkorea (talk). Self-nominated at 21:47, 11 September 2019 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Good to go. Congrats on one of your first DYKs. Current merge proposal does not affect the DYK; oppose consensus forming anyway. Ergo Sum 00:15, 17 September 2019 (UTC)

  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but noted two paragraphs that lack citations per Rule D2. I also removed the example of the iPad Pro from the hook and article because it is not in the source. In general, we don't put examples in parentheses in the hook. Yoninah (talk) 20:57, 19 September 2019 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: I have added citations to those, and also removed some promotional language from the article. Taewangkorea (talk) 15:34, 21 September 2019 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Restoring tick per Ergo Sum's review. Yoninah (talk) 18:00, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

References

  1. ^ Griffin, Andrew. "IPHONE 11 PRO: RELEASE DATE, PRICE AND DETAILS RELEASED ABOUT NEW PREMIUM APPLE HANDSET". The Independent.