Template:Did you know nominations/Starr Long

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:04, 10 September 2014 (UTC)

Starr Long[edit]

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... that Starr Long, executive producer of the new game Shroud of the Avatar, was also the original director of the pioneering game Ultima Online?

Reviewed: Historical coats of arms of the U.S. states [1]

Created by Elonka (talk). Self nominated at 22:15, 31 August 2014 (UTC).

More than 1500 words, new article, neutral, wellcited, hook verified. No other issues. In hook, i think "new game" should be replaced with "upcoming game" as Shroud of Avtar is not released yet. Elonka, What do you say? Everything else is OK. -Nizil (talk) 19:34, 5 September 2014 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that Starr Long, executive producer of the upcoming game Shroud of the Avatar, was also the original director of the pioneering game Ultima Online?

Thanks for the review! I have no problem with changing "new" to "upcoming". :) --El on ka 14:29, 7 September 2014 (UTC)

Everything Ok. Elonka, keep contributing. Regards, -Nizil (talk) 18:29, 10 September 2014 (UTC)