Template:Did you know nominations/Sandycombe Lodge

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 22:27, 25 December 2013 (UTC)

Sandycombe Lodge

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• ... that Sandycombe Lodge, a Grade II* listed house which was designed and built in 1813 by the artist J M W Turner, was added to English Heritage's Heritage at Risk Register in 2013?

Created by Headhitter (talk). Nominated by Tentinator (talk) at 09:58, 20 December 2013 (UTC).

• "designed by and built for the artist J M W Turner in 1813" would be more correct, as he didn't build it himself. The third paragraph is too close a paraphrasing of the text on the Heritage at Risk website. With four links apart from the article, could we drop the link to English Heritage? Otherwise, long enough and recent enough and the hook is otherwise good. Edwardx (talk) 13:11, 22 December 2013 (UTC)

• ALT1 ... that Sandycombe Lodge, a Grade II* listed house which was designed by and built for the artist J. M. W. Turner in 1813, was added to English Heritage's Heritage at Risk Register in 2013?   Tentinator   15:04, 22 December 2013 (UTC)

• Paraphrasing and hook issues dealt with. Edwardx (talk) 22:40, 22 December 2013 (UTC)