Template:Did you know nominations/Polish Academy of Literature
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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 14:23, 25 December 2011 (UTC)
Polish Academy of Literature[edit]
- ... that socialist writer and Freemason Andrzej Strug declined the invitation to join the prestigious Polish Academy of Literature (pictured) as he was upset by voices of official criticism of the Freemason movement?
Created/expanded by Cezary Baryka (talk). Self nom at 04:16, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
- While I'm happy to accept the foreign-language hook source, the wording of the hook was a little clunky. I've fixed it up, but the fixes bring you over the 200 character hook limit for DYK. Are you able to shorten it at all? Arctic Night 19:57, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review, Arctic Night. Much appreciated. Please note, I included a Google translation in references specifically to confirm the foreign-language hook source. Hope it's enough. Here's my alternative hook within the 200 characters count. — Cezary Baryka 00:54, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
- ALT 1: ... that socialist writer and Freemason Andrzej Strug declined the invitation to join the Polish Academy of Literature (pictured) being upset by voices of official criticism of the Freemason movement?
- ALT 2: ... that socialist writer and Freemason Andrzej Strug declined an invitation to join the Polish Academy of Literature (pictured) as he was upset by its criticism of the Freemason movement?
Date, length, and hook now all look good. Photo of building also looks OK to use on Main Page. --EncycloPetey (talk) 05:21, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
