Template:Did you know nominations/Marion Hartog

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:00, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

Marion Hartog

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Marion Hartog

... that the first Jewish women's periodical was founded by Marion Hartog in 1855? Source:https://jwa.org/encyclopedia/article/hartog-marion

Created by Kyuko (talk). Nominated by Andrew J.Kurbiko (talk) at 10:56, 28 October 2020 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Regards, Jeromi Mikhael ^(marhata) 14:19, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Recommending that the bolded subject be moved forward and the hook changed to an active verb:
ALT1: ... that Marion Hartog founded the first Jewish women's periodical in 1855? Yoninah (talk) 20:25, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Even though the Jewish Encyclopedia source is public domain, it should be cited in the text. Please add a cite to the second paragraph under Career, per Rule D2. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 01:11, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

Done. Kyuko (talk) 02:37, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

Thank you. Restoring tick per Jeromi Mikhael's review. Yoninah (talk) 15:46, 8 November 2020 (UTC)