Template:Did you know nominations/Eastwood After Hours: Live at Carnegie Hall
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:32, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
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Eastwood After Hours: Live at Carnegie Hall[edit]
- ... that Clint Eastwood's contributions to jazz were celebrated at a live performance at Carnegie Hall by musicians of the genre's community?
Created by TheGracefulSlick (talk). Self-nominated at 03:47, 19 June 2017 (UTC).
Interesting concert, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. - In the Hook; I'd prefer not to pipe the interesting concert title to something unspecific. I am not too familiar with the genre, - do they actually say "community"? - Article: it's part of the requirements, but I could do with less - don't know how to call it, - examples: "cultural legacy" is fine, why "far-reaching cultural legacy"? In "but, more importantly, he remarked the album was 'a ripe excuse to toast American musical diversity'.", who says "more importantly"? You? Better drop it then. Someone else? With a source, please. I'd like to see the cover bigger (aligned with the title box), but can't make it work the way I usually use. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:07, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the album Eastwood After Hours: Live at Carnegie Hall features a concert that celebrated Clint Eastwood's contributions to jazz?
- Gerda Arendt I made some changes and added a new hook. Let me know if it is an improvement over the original hook.TheGracefulSlick (talk) 01:59, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
- I like the hook much more, thank you! Is their another term for tribute concert, to avoid a duplication to contibutions? I'd prefer the full title bold, or - but less effective - mentioning that it was a live concert at CH, - a place that rings a bell with some readers. - Thank you for the article changes! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:41, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
- Gerda Arendt that makes a lot of sense; I expanded it to the full title. I think the hook still acknowledges the fact that the concert recognizes Eastwood's contributions so I just removed "tribute".TheGracefulSlick (talk) 07:54, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
Thank you. - Next time, please word an ALT2, to make comparison possible, - as it is now, my comment above makes little sense ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:22, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
- Gerda Arendt that makes a lot of sense; I expanded it to the full title. I think the hook still acknowledges the fact that the concert recognizes Eastwood's contributions so I just removed "tribute".TheGracefulSlick (talk) 07:54, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
- I like the hook much more, thank you! Is their another term for tribute concert, to avoid a duplication to contibutions? I'd prefer the full title bold, or - but less effective - mentioning that it was a live concert at CH, - a place that rings a bell with some readers. - Thank you for the article changes! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:41, 1 July 2017 (UTC)
