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I haven't read or familiarized myself with the novel, so would have trouble making the change myself, but the second sentence of the introductory paragraph reads more like a blurb on the back cover than a summary of the what the book is. This phrase, in particular, "a zombie story in the hands of a Pulitzer-nominated novelist" sounds more like it's trying to sell the reader the book than inform them what it is. Is there anyone with more familiarity with the book or author who could rewrite this sentence in a less informal style? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:306:3068:4FE0:952E:70B3:B39:30E4 (talk) 17:34, 5 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]