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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 January 2022 and 13 May 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Melissaoai (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Jzaragoza23.

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Recent edits to article and suggested further expansion[edit]

I have made a few cuts to the article, and explained why in my edit summaries. This article needs to reference sources of the information written for example by journalists or academics. Hawaiian women writers would be a good place to search for some content. Making a list of notable Hawaiian women who are in Wikipedia and linking them would also be a good addition to expand this article. Pakoire (talk) 20:57, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I totally agree with your comment and also believe that the original article needed more references in regards to reliable sources such as Hawaiian women writers and journal articles that related to this concept. it is important to keep this in mind because reliable sources can make an article stronger and more accurate when viewing it. Overall, I definitely enjoyed reading your opinions and ideas of how to make this article more reliable and interesting.- Jessica Zaragoza Jzaragoza23 (talk) 18:41, 16 March 2022 (UTC) Hello. I will be adding a history subtopic above the first subtopic. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Melissaoai (talk • contribs) 01:16, 13 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]