Talk:Willie Mitchell (ice hockey)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Hello YellowMonkey (vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 08:05, 7 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comprehensiveness
- Looks like I'll end up banging on about this on every North American sport article, but how come there isn't anything about playing style, strengths and weaknesses. Surely in a top-flight competition mainstream sport that is on TV every time there is analysis of this stuff. I can see snippets in some of the sources
- Any information on partnerships he has with other players?
Sources
- Some of the news articles are missing dates of publication, cite 29 30 34 at least
- A lot of paragraphs end with unsourced sentences. Where do these come from.
- Source for VC playing defensively?
Info clarity
- Part on international career. Is that meant to imply that the selectors reward players from teams that fail, or that the games clashed with the NHL finals and the plays chose club over country?
- These Team USA/Canada slangs always annoy me...
- If this guy is a defender, doesn't it make sense to have stats or reports on his ability to shut down opposition forwards?? Are these stats recorded? Or his effect on his team's defence. It seems counterintuitive to see that the stats are entirely about goal-scoring. Goalkeepers aren't measured by the number of goals they score, are they?

YellowMonkey (vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 08:05, 7 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot. Some real good input and all solid points. Should take me a few days to address 'em. Orlandkurtenbach (talk) 09:24, 7 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Alrite, I've gone ahead and addressed the above concerns as best as I could. Looking forward to your feedback. Orlandkurtenbach (talk) 23:29, 10 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Good work, thanks a lot YellowMonkey (vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 05:12, 20 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]