Talk:William Pantulf
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"In 1092 Pantulf journeyed to southern Italy again, this time to secure a relic of Saint Nicholas for his foundation at Noron.[9][d] During this visit, he was offered extensive lands in Apulia by Robert Guiscard, but declined the offer and returned to the north.[2]" In 1092, Robert Guiscard was dead for 7 years (Guiscard died in 1085).--31.35.104.232 (talk) 12:15, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 09:28, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
- Info box
- Link and capitalise Baron
- Link Anglo-Norman
- Instead of Parent(s), I'd put Mother as Beatrice, and then have Father as Unknown
- You could have other relations as including his sister
- Lead
- Link Anglo-Norman
- Link and capitalise Baron
- Did Baron of Wem instead. Ealdgyth - Talk 14:29, 23 April 2015 (UTC)
- Link Wem
- Link vassal
- Lead could be a bit more encompassing and with a bit more detail
- I'm open to suggestions on what to include.
- Just a take two or three points from the rest of the article and include it in the lead so it's more broad in it's summary. — ₳aron 12:35, 24 April 2015 (UTC)
- I'm open to suggestions on what to include.
- Background and family
- His family had been resident there since at least around 1030 → His family had lived there since around 1030
- Link vassals
- After the Conquest
- Link Sussex and Shropshire
- Capitalised Hundred
- and are considered → and were considered
- No. Are is correct here as it is a historical judgment currently. It's a judgment that came after the actual events - in fact around 1960 or so. Saying "were" would imply that it was considered a barony at the time of Pantulf's life, which it probably wasn't. Ealdgyth - Talk 14:29, 23 April 2015 (UTC)
- along with King → along with the king,
- temporarily because he → temporarily when he
- of the abbot. → What abbot?
- "Pantulf sought refuge at the Abbey of Saint-Evroul in Normandy while he was under suspicion; he and his family were under the protection of the abbot." - abbot of Saint-Evroul. My source doesn't give the abbot's name, or I would have used it. Nor do I have a list of the abbots of that monastery, unfortunately, Ealdgyth - Talk 14:29, 23 April 2015 (UTC)
- Death and legacy
- There's no need to have the final sentence as a second paragraph, just make this section one paragraph instead of breaking it up and splitting it.
- Outcome
On hold for 7 days. — ₳aron 16:51, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
- I made a few changes. Passing. — ₳aron 13:41, 25 April 2015 (UTC)
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