Talk:William Brault

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Review: December 26, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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A fact from William Brault appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 26 December 2023 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that William Brault was inducted into the Green Bay Packers Hall of Fame 28 years after he founded it?

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Did you know nomination[edit]

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The result was: promoted by Lightburst talk 23:30, 22 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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... that William Brault was inducted into the Green Bay Packers Hall of Fame 28 years after he founded it? Source: ""Brault led the effort to create the Packers Hall of Fame..." "The hall opened its doors July 1, 1967..." "Inducted: 1995"
- Reviewed: Louise Julien

Moved to mainspace by Gonzo fan2007 (talk). Self-nominated at 20:00, 20 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/William Brault; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

The article is new enough and long enough and the QPQ is done. The hook is interesting - it is in the article and it cited. The article is neutral and referenced. The article uses the correct inline citations and quality sources. Bruxton (talk) 20:32, 20 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Kaiser matias (talk · contribs) 00:34, 22 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

~~Will start shortly. Kaiser matias (talk) 00:34, 22 December 2023 (UTC)~~[reply]

Comments[edit]

"Brault attended St. Luke Grade School and St. Francis Xavier grade school before graduating from Catholic Central High School..." It's best to clarify where the schools were located. Reading the next section it sounds like he grew up in Green Bay, but that is not clear here, and it should be. I'd even recommend moving the first half of the first sentence of the "Business" section ("In 1939, the Brault family moved to Green Bay, Wisconsin" to the "Early life" section. To help with the flow, the "Business" section could start "After moving to Green Bay, the Brault family opened a restaurant, Brault's Cafe, on Main Street. Brault began his career working with his father at the restaurant.", or something like that.
- Revised per your suggestion. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:03, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"As a kid, Brault travelled often with his father's band, the Art Brault's Canadians." Any specific information on where they toured?
- The source says "to Michigan, Texas and destinations in between" ... I added "nationally" to summarize. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:03, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"Brault became associated with tourism after the local chamber of commerce asked him to assist with the formation of the Green Bay Visitor and Convention Bureau." Is there a timeline for when the chamber of commerce reached out?
- No exact date, although I added "in the early 1960s" based on the sourcing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:03, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That should be all, and once the above are addressed should be good to go. Kaiser matias (talk) 16:12, 23 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Kaiser matias for the review! I think I addressed all your comments. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:03, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good to me, well done. Kaiser matias (talk) 21:28, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]