Talk:Valentine's Day (The Office)/GA1
GA Review[edit]
Looking nice so far. Some suggestions for improvement:
- Unbold quotes around episode title.
- Written by Michael Schur, and directed by Greg Daniels -- no need for comma here.
- Maybe mention something about reception in the lead, and give a brief overview of the plot.
- Jan kisses him then groans -- "and then"; 'then' by itself is not a conjunction.
- No need to wikilink Greg Daniels in the second paragraph of Production, it's linked just above.
- The writers didn't have a punchline in the scene -- avoid contractions; "did not".
- The whole section about the Dwight bobbleheads should probably be moved from Production to Reception -- it's the fans' reaction, no?
- Link Television Without Pity.
- The OfficeTally.com poll should go, per WP:MOSTV.
Otherwise, looking good. You've got a week to make changes, so good luck. —97198 talk 06:36, 13 August 2008 (UTC)