Talk:Tropical Storm Harvey (2011)/GA1
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
- "Tropical Storm Harvey was a tropical storm that formed and dissipated during the 2011 Atlantic hurricane season." REally? That's as boring as it gets? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
- "Harvey was also the last in a record-breaking string of eight consecutive storms that reached only tropical storm status. Hurricane Irene, the next storm to form after Harvey, reached hurricane status. Harvey developed from a westward-moving tropical wave that emerged off the coast of Africa. " delink Africa, major place. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
- "The origins of Tropical Storm Harvey trace back to a westward-moving Atlantic tropical wave that is estimated to have passed over Dakar, Senegal, at 0000 UTC on August 11, 2011.[3]" dleink Atlantic per above.
- " At 1800 UTC on August 18, the system was designated Tropical Depression Eight, with maximum sustained winds of 35 mph (56 km/h) and a minimum pressure of 1006 mb.[2][16]" inHg? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
- "Continuing to deepen, Tropical Depression Eight attained tropical storm status during the afternoon and was named Harvey in an intermediate advisory at 1800 UTC.[18] " what is an intermediate advisory? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
- An Intermediate Advisory is an advisory that is released before an official advisory. No change needed. STO12 (talk) 04:52, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
- The layman does not know that. YE Pacific Hurricane 04:53, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
- An Intermediate Advisory is an advisory that is released before an official advisory. No change needed. STO12 (talk) 04:52, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
- " Adverse conditions on the island began on August 15 and had mostly cleared by August 18, although residual shower activity remained possible throughout the day.[21]" redundant to MH, and since it was only a TL when it moved through the area, stuff like this can led to confusion. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
- There should be well more impact here. The writing is really good, but it is not comprehensive enough to meet GA status at this time.
- Cut back on See also stuff, only the Other storms named Harvey and the Timeline of the 2011 AHS should be their IMO. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
Haven't been any updates since YE's notes on the 11th; should this be failed? Wizardman 17:31, 1 December 2012 (UTC)
- I'm going to fail it. It's not complete yet. The MH skips from development to remnants. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:13, 4 December 2012 (UTC)