Talk:Sunshine of Your Love/GA1
GA Review[edit]
GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 19:53, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks FunkMonk. Why is Jimi Hendrix posthumous discography ignored?
- "or riff developed by Bruce" and "Brown had a difficult time writing lyrics", Dowed etc. Introduce all persons and their role at first mention in the article, not just the intro. The lead is just a summary of the article, the article itself should be able to stand alone.
- "gave the song their wholehearted approval" The song? Earlier you mention several demos of several songs.
- "and harmonic motions like like A–C–G" One like too many? Also, same quote could have links to Led Zeppelin and Whole Lotta Love?
- "Hendrix often performed faster instrumental versions of the song, which he often dedicated to Cream." One often too much maybe?
- I'd expect the sample to include the main riff (most well known part of the song), but it cuts just after and before?
- My setup doesn't allow me to play these. If it doesn't have the riff, then it shouldn't be here. —Ojorojo (talk) 18:14, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
- I could maybe make a new version, can you give me some timing for what part you'd want to include? FunkMonk (talk) 18:24, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
- I like the segment beginning at 2:02, you can hear the riff and the woman tone. However, some may want to hear vocals, so the very beginning may be a good choice. —Ojorojo (talk) 19:53, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
- I could maybe make a new version, can you give me some timing for what part you'd want to include? FunkMonk (talk) 18:24, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
- My setup doesn't allow me to play these. If it doesn't have the riff, then it shouldn't be here. —Ojorojo (talk) 18:14, 21 February 2015 (UTC)