Talk:Sunshine Days/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:20, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
Issues[edit]
General[edit]
- No dab links. Great work!
- No dead links. Great work!
- Images have good rationales
Infobox[edit]
- No issues
Lede[edit]
- Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK
- Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
- "The episode first aired in the United States on May 12, 2002 on the Fox network" → "It originally aired on the Fox network on May 12, 2002"
- "unconnected to the series' wider mythology" should be "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the overarching fictional history of The X-Files"
- To many "The episode", consider re-writing.
- "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 6.2 and was viewed by 6.5 million households and 10.4 million viewers in its initial broadcast" → "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 6.2, was viewed by 6.5 million households, and 10.4 million viewers in its initial broadcast"
- finale should be final
Plot[edit]
- Link California
- Add actor for Blake and Mike
- "was where the popular television series The Brady Bunch was filmed" → "where the comedy series The Brady Bunch was filmed. This is partly per WP:NPOV
- "Later that night" add comma
- Actor for Martin
- discovers should be discover
- Add actor for Fogelman
- Add actor for Oliver Martin
- Add actor for various others
- Link Washington, DC
- Should be "Washington, D.C." not "Washington, DC"
Production[edit]
- finale should be final
- "The Brady Bunch house set featured in the episode was built "from scratch". Huh?
Broadcast and reception[edit]
- Link Nielsen household rating to Nielsen ratings
- "Fox Broadcasting Company promoted the episode with the promise that it was the "most bizarre" episode of The X-Files to ever been shown". Firstly, Fox Broadcasting Company should be Fox. Secondly, Fox should not be linked as it is already linked above
References[edit]
- Unlink season 9, and 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment as it already linked above
- The Hollywood Reporter is missing publisher (Prometheus Global Media). The current one is incorrect
External links[edit]
- Nothing to be fixed
That's all. On hold, and great work! TBrandley 03:40, 22 July 2012 (UTC)